Calling All Nit-pickers!

[laramie]

Or junior editors:

I've completed the initial versions of my flyers for Fantasy Images and Mudra art, and am soliciting feedback. Have I missed any typos? Is something not working? If this were your flyer would you want the buyers for the stores to see it, and expect them to use it without trouble?

Dreamspell Catalog

Mudra Art Catalog

and the order form

Thanks!

Comments

Dreammspell brochure, page 2

[maiac.livejournal.com]

"Bright spirits can join forces" -- maybe just "Bright spirits join forces"? In the picture, the joining isn't just potential, but actual.

A "were-cat, or dog, rabbit or bear" -> "were-cat, or -dog, -rabbit or
-bear"

Wishing Well: it looks like there's an extra space after "maiden, ".

The Inner Cat: "There's more to anyone than we think we are": the pronouns don't match. "There's more to us than we think we are".

Postcard prices: "fewer than 10", not "less than 10"

Re: Dreammspell brochure, page 2

[skylarker.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'll be implementing these changes soon.