Calling All Nit-pickers!

[laramie]

Or junior editors:

I've completed the initial versions of my flyers for Fantasy Images and Mudra art, and am soliciting feedback. Have I missed any typos? Is something not working? If this were your flyer would you want the buyers for the stores to see it, and expect them to use it without trouble?

Dreamspell Catalog

Mudra Art Catalog

and the order form

Thanks!

Comments

Re: Nit-picking's My Specialty

[skylarker.livejournal.com]

Yes; this is exactly the kind of feedback I was looking for. Thank you!

Re: Nit-picking's My Specialty

[maiac.livejournal.com]

What is your deadline? My brain hit the wall just as I scrolled to page 2. I can look at the rest tomorrow if you don't need to be finished before then.

Re: Nit-picking's My Specialty

[skylarker.livejournal.com]

Tomorrow should be fine, thanks. I just want to get this out Friday.