Calling All Nit-pickers!

[laramie]

Or junior editors:

I've completed the initial versions of my flyers for Fantasy Images and Mudra art, and am soliciting feedback. Have I missed any typos? Is something not working? If this were your flyer would you want the buyers for the stores to see it, and expect them to use it without trouble?

Dreamspell Catalog

Mudra Art Catalog

and the order form

Thanks!

Comments

Mudra brochure

[maiac.livejournal.com]

Prices e.g. $0.75, not $-.75

Again, "fewer than 10", not "less than 10"

Are the "Focus" and "Love" pictures even? "Focus" looks ever so slightly higher.

"Warm Heart" looks slightly lower than the other pictures in the row.

"Life in the Abstract": "This series ... captures"

The names of the individual "Life in the Abstract" pictures don't need colons after them.

Re: Mudra brochure

[skylarker.livejournal.com]

Thanks for your help! I realized I still need to set up some webpages with Paypal codes to generate the item numbers for the 'Fine Art' page before I can print this thing...