Calling All Nit-pickers!

[laramie]

Or junior editors:

I've completed the initial versions of my flyers for Fantasy Images and Mudra art, and am soliciting feedback. Have I missed any typos? Is something not working? If this were your flyer would you want the buyers for the stores to see it, and expect them to use it without trouble?

Dreamspell Catalog

Mudra Art Catalog

and the order form

Thanks!

Comments

Order form looks good!

[maiac.livejournal.com]

Or should I find a nit to pick so you know I looked at it?

Re: Order form looks good!

[skylarker.livejournal.com]

I've found a nit of my own: the diagonal line leading to the definitions for 'PC' and 'GC.' I want to change it to a line composed of right angles.

Thanks for all your help!