Dreammspell brochure, page 2

posted by [identity profile] maiac.livejournal.com at 01:25am on 15/11/2007
"Bright spirits can join forces" -- maybe just "Bright spirits join forces"? In the picture, the joining isn't just potential, but actual.

A "were-cat, or dog, rabbit or bear" -> "were-cat, or -dog, -rabbit or
-bear"

Wishing Well: it looks like there's an extra space after "maiden, ".

The Inner Cat: "There's more to anyone than we think we are": the pronouns don't match. "There's more to us than we think we are".

Postcard prices: "fewer than 10", not "less than 10"

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Re: Dreammspell brochure, page 2

posted by [identity profile] skylarker.livejournal.com at 01:31am on 15/11/2007
Thanks! I'll be implementing these changes soon.
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